Robert and Fahad book #1
68 pages or so novella
Set in the desert of Abu Dhabi, Robert and Fahad see a sudden light in the desert, an unusual sight. They decide to investigate.
In short story, I always feel something is lacking. Here this drama is missing suspense and intrigue as well as a denouement hard to guess. The mystery is rather shallow, dull and boring. Most of all it is not particularly well-written and needs a lot of work to bring the style up to par.
Not for me for sure
Set in the desert of Abu Dhabi, Robert and Fahad see a sudden light in the desert, an unusual sight. They decide to investigate.
In short story, I always feel something is lacking. Here this drama is missing suspense and intrigue as well as a denouement hard to guess. The mystery is rather shallow, dull and boring. Most of all it is not particularly well-written and needs a lot of work to bring the style up to par.
Not for me for sure
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